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I decided to improve my street photography skills.
Here is the second submission of the "summer in the city" series. Comments, favorites and critiques are very welcome. I hope you enjoy it,  have a nice weekend! chris Comments
 Ok, I don't know anything about photography, so my comment is going to be... simple.
I like it, because it makes me feel warm and it makes me remember those really cold days, but the sun is shining. And I think this photo is great, because it wasn't... made: you just took it. I think. ^^ -- What would I be without my friends? Hmm... probably normal.   Ich finde dieses Bild ziemlich gut.
Es zeigt einmal mehr die Skepsis der meisten Menschen gegenüber der Street Fotografie. Das Licht ist super genutzt und kommt auch gut raus. Ich würde lediglich einen höheren Kontrast nutzen, da das Bild in den dunklen Teilen durch das Gegenlicht etwas zu flau wird. Einziger Störfaktor für mich ist der Arm unten links, der den Frame etwas "destabilisiert". Street ist eine schöne Sache! Mach auf jeden Fall weiter damit. Gut bist du ja   Hi there,
You've been featured in my latest journal  [link] -- The human experience isn't as pleasant as we're forced to believe. My First DD! - My Second DD!  I like the way you captured him looking at you.
Nice tone and light. -- Living is easy with eyes closed  ...there were no complains. -- ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Comment, to get comments. Share your kindness, not your hate. Love the art, before yourself. bumstata  1. kolor lepiej mi tu gra
2. pan ma tarcze strategicznie umiejscowiona. sam sie prosi zeby cos sie stalo zaraz ;] ta tarcza dorabia jakas historie do zdjecia. -- veni, vidi, got nauseuous ----------------------------- visit my gallery prawdziwa ofiara!
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while I do like the lighting. and that hue of the sunlight does create a very nostalgic vibe--this photo---has me tilting my head like a dog confused.
while u mention this as being of the 'summer ' series...it feels more like a pre-winter shot.
While the composition is right on--the elbow in the foreground---just knocks the composition off. Its intrusive and does nothing for the film like quality that this moment presents.
The tones of the subject---come off too red for me...that is totally my own thoughts.
what would i do to change this?
I would opt to crop this from the left side of the mans zipper--yup--halving him---so that the one eye on ya...or towards the viewer---adds some mystery--while i know it will seem odd in diameter then--as the square format works good for this...
I wouldn't be happy with this--for myself...as is.
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