It is probably my favourite photograph from your colourful part the gallery.
The composition looks thought over. Wonderfully taking the top of the photograph away. Even though is filling 80 % wholes isn't overwhelming. A bit I associate him with stars in the sky. A bit photograph is falling on the left, but it doesn't matter. this photograph consists this way kind of of crossing levels and divisions.
Colouristically are also perfectly. Greynesses are counteracting each other with lights. Accents blue and yellow are having a positive effect on the whole. Even though a night is ruling it is very brightly.
Don't erase it. It's important to document life as it is now, but it's most important to try and break through the shell most people have. They go about their daily business, and never really look at the world around them. But... if it's on the computer, that's a different story. They are comfortable, relaxed and ready (we hope) to use their eyes and brains. This shot is beautifully done. Bravo.
The pattern of glittery lights is hypnotizing. However, the bottom half seems dead. I'm not interested in the base or the locale; just the pretty lights and blue columns. Maybe you could tighten up the shot a little and focus more on the essence of what you were capturing?