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BREGENZ, AUSTRIA

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comments, favs and certainly critiques are more than just welcome!

have a great week,

chris.

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Nice portrayal of contemporary architecture. Love the minimal box and its reflection contrasting with the sky; great B&W processing. In composition, the box seems in conflict with the busyness specifically to its right. Since the main object is horizontally dead center, it gives surrounding elements a chance to throw the eye off a bit. I can't seem to pull my eyes away from the railing and light, they lack the architectural simplicity in the remainder of the photo. I'd suggest either cropping your square composition, just past the light and having the "monitor" pushing towards the lower-right (that would also give it more visual weight) or maybe ditching the 1:1 format altogether. Everything else is so simple and clean, yet those couple minute details seems to add a complexity I think is extraneous.
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JoseMelim Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Very interesting subject and a great composition, indeed! I very much like the way the square structure stands out. Magnificent sky. The B&W option really adds a lot here.
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:iconafinewar:
AFineWar Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello,

This picture has been featured in Wonderful World V
I hope you give it a look :heart:

Thanks
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:iconeasyfloat:
easyfloat Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011  Professional General Artist
looks like double golden section in minor of square.
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:iconabacus78:
Abacus78 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011
Strong, stunning image. Great composition and B&W tones.
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:icongnato:
gnato Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Professional Photographer
hehe die können ja nicht nur käse in bregenz produzieren : ) haben auch noch gute architektur : )
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:iconleebolton:
leebolton Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2010
beautiful shot
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:iconmeridzejn:
MeriDzejn Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
I love your architecture photography.
This photo is surreal, love the lines+clouds
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:iconvesnasvesna:
VesnaSvesna Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2010  Professional Photographer
featured [link]
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:iconeilidh:
eilidh Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
I love the feeling of desolation coming from your urban shots. It's silencing, in a strange way.
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:iconmomaidesign:
MoMaidesign Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2010
Works great in monochrome. Graphic, dramatic, cool! Good work!
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:icongosia:
Gosia Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Love the geometry and abstract quality of this. And those clouds create a strong dynamic atmosphere. Great tones too. :heart:
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:iconmiskis:
miskis Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2010
I adore the monolithic vibe this has.. another wonderful shot.
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:iconbalrogofchaos:
Balrogofchaos Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautyfully simple! I like it! :) ;)
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:iconlinz3:
linz3 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
whoa... its... a box... lol very cool! :D black and white photos rock
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:iconwhathisname:
whathisname Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
Lovely perspective and graphic look!
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:iconsr-kabuto:
sr-kabuto Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
Great photos, love each one
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:iconmakepictures:
makepictures Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2010
Always interested in photographs that could have been sculptures by the photographer and that beg the question: without a camera would the photographer have invested the energy to build it. I can't think of a single photograph in this category that I have made that would fit this criterion.
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:iconchristianburtscher:
ChristianBurtscher Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010
ah, festspielhaus... schön gesehen!
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:icongraysayell:
GraySayell Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
great shot :thumbsup:
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:iconnoske:
noske Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010
realy nice
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:iconletter-unopened:
letter-unopened Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010
amazing... i love it!!
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:icon1510:
1510 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
excelent :thumbsup:
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:icondevilicious:
devilicious Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Professional Photographer
fabulous one!! :+favlove: it is so very contemporary - edgy - love it!
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:iconhorstschmier:
HorstSchmier Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010
A monitor for important things !! ;-)
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:iconkaarmen:
Kaarmen Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010
great
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:iconzanasoul:
ZanaSoul Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010
Oh this is mezmerizing me..a square in a square...clouds and more lines!
Great visuals and shot : )
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:iconbigcbigc:
bigcbigc Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010
mind blowing! :)
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:iconyatu-ex:
yatu-ex Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
hach ja, bodenseeluft wär jetzt fein :) schöne österreichische architektur schön eingefangen!
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:iconladyfianna:
LadyFianna Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010
I'm in love with the composition here :love: Stunning work!
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:iconarterie:
arterie Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Professional
very enigmatic! Super! :)
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:iconwchild:
wchild Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Professional Photographer
:thumbsup:
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RossoDH Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
I can´t explain to myself -How can you make a simple thing just gorgeous?-
:love:
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:iconkimagu:
Kimagu Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Beautyfully simple! I like it!
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:icongetcarter:
getcarter Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010   Photographer
Thank you very much!
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:iconprairiecalifornian:
prairiecalifornian Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Professional Photographer
Love the lines! Very interesting break-up of a box, no!? :nod:
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:icongetcarter:
getcarter Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010   Photographer
Thank you! You must explain the "break-up" thing - I didn´t get it!
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:iconprairiecalifornian:
prairiecalifornian Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Professional Photographer
Break up as in dividing up the box with the lines. :) I guess it's the interior design in me that always enjoys finding different ways of breaking up shapes!
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vehrlich Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010
interesting:)
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:icongetcarter:
getcarter Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010   Photographer
:bow:
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JonnyGoodboy Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Good stuff,unusual Chris :thumbsup:
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:icongetcarter:
getcarter Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010   Photographer
I am always looking for the good unusual stuff, Jonny! Thank you my friend, did I already tell you that I am awaiting your new stuff? :D
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JonnyGoodboy Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
And you do it very well mate,it`s your forte :nod:
And no you haven`t told me,I`ve only been shooting twice in 10 weeks my friend,not sure when I`ll be back here fully yet,hopefully soon :handshake:
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:icongetcarter:
getcarter Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010   Photographer
hopefully, you´re being missed at this side of the wire!
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:iconjonnygoodboy:
JonnyGoodboy Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Danke friend :salute:
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:iconrobcherry:
robcherry Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Very cool mate!
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:icongetcarter:
getcarter Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010   Photographer
I love to hear that, thanks!
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:iconzuckerblau:
zuckerblau Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Sehr tolle Komposition und auf die Wolken bin ich ganz besonders neidisch :XD:
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:icongetcarter:
getcarter Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010   Photographer
:bow: Danke!
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inObrAS Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010
:thumbsup::nod: Great!
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