M O N I T O R

Nice portrayal of contemporary architecture. Love the minimal box and its reflection contrasting with the sky; great B&W processing. In composition, the box seems in conflict with the busyness specifically to its right. Since the main object is horizontally dead center, it gives surrounding elements a chance to throw the eye off a bit. I can't seem to pull my eyes away from the railing and light, they lack the architectural simplicity in the remainder of the photo. I'd suggest either cropping your square composition, just past the light and having the "monitor" pushing towards the lower-right (that would also give it more visual weight) or maybe ditching the 1:1 format altogether. Everything else is so simple and clean, yet those couple minute details seems to add a complexity I think is extraneous.